Today, I gave all I had to someone who needed it more
Sometimes we need to save a little for ourselves. 🙂 Your poem spoke to how we all feel at times. In just a few words you said much. Jackie http://familytrove.blogspot.com/
Maybe you will know tomorrow. Sometimes a little space between the days helps us process.
I hear the utter exhaustion in your words. I know that someone felt your strength and support. There is no other place you could have been today.
You summed up “one of those days” just perfectly.
Oh, I understand this feeling completely. And you captured it so well in few words. I hope you are taking care of YOU today.
You sound exhausted. Great use of a short, repeating poem to get your message across. Great job!
The simplicity is so effective. Readers can feel the tiredness as they read. I like the title being in lowercase- its like you were too tired to hit that shift button.
Sometimes the best you can do is to be there for someone. This is so touching in so few words and I hope you find some comfort in being there and that someone does the same for you in this time.
Susan, I feel your exhaustion. You did what you had to do, like you always do. Be at peace with that, and rest.
Now it’s time to give yourself a rest. Tomorrow is another day, and I’m sure you’ll continue to give again because that’s what you do. But tomorrow is another day.
I’m tired and sad for you 🙂
The repetition of repeated refrains brings home the feeling of exhaustion, and that there is nothing left in the tank. Awesome piece, short and powerful.
I know how you feel. It’s draining but we have to do it; giving…
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